hey bloggers it's so boring in level 4 anyways this blog post is about how to ride a bike
do you like to ride bikes cause I do
do you know how to ride a bike?
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
hey bloggers it's so boring in level 4 anyways this blog post is about how to ride a bike
do you like to ride bikes cause I do
do you know how to ride a bike?
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Kia ora Arlo, this is great instructional writing. Did you try it out with Annabelle to see if it worked? Next time you could explain that this was a Literacy task!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Arlo, This is a great piece of instructional writing and I am glad you picked this piece of work to write a blog post about.
ReplyDeleteDuring class do you remember when I used a bike and tried out some instructional writing to see if I could ride the bike? That is a great way to test if your instructions are specific enough. it would be great if you could read out your instructions to someone at home and see how it goes!
Miss Carr.
Nice job Arlo
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